comment on my stuff. advanced critique encourahhged. which is like encouraged. but with 'hh' in the semi-middle.
I want comments and criticisms.
i love
The New Pornographers.


Chipped OrangeYoure a damsel in distress, but save me instead and well call it even and you canChipped Orange
race me to the candy store,
warped sugar canes and melted jujubes and slide them into pockets we're innocent and we never knew
what the candyman would do
if he caught us.
but then we were pirates and sailed all over the neighborhood climbed into backyards
and stole the vegetables because thats what garden pirates did.
and we collected our bounty and hid it in the tree house and how the tree house smelled of rotting wood and chipped
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Your brother said your mother was a firefly you buried in the earth
Let's kill Rudy.
No one will be sad.
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- Sarasvita
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